Perfectly imperfect

The screeching sound of the rusting door,
Is the old enviable memories.
Yet I see the opening door.

Getting squeezed in a thronged train
And losing my ring,
I am stumbling to look down and search for it
Neither to blame someone.
Where I’m obligated to get down perplexed.

The few seconds of rain bedeweding my head
Where the mucky soil grimes my foot
Leaving many parts untouched.

My life is
the egressed rice
Around his lips
Which his little finger kicks the ass off remorselessly.

Yes, I’m the grayed tulip
Among a few beauteous looking ones
Tweaked by a school girl
Craving for a glance since the moment she plucked
But even it’s death is left unperceived.

I’m the awkward burp in between the perfect kiss which ruins everything perfectly.

Life is imperfect
Just the way
Water in the ocean
touches only my toes
Leaving the entire foot longing for it.

Yes it’s perfectly imperfect

Like my poem seeking for the words which is falling apart every single day
As the browny leaves shedding off the trees hopelessly
Or
It is imperfect just like the voidness
in my head trying hard to obtrude the unwanted memories.

-Mk

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    1. Haha thank you Bharath anna โค

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  1. ESP says:

    Awkward burp in between a perfect kiss..loved it! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Lol thank you ESP ๐Ÿ™‚

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    2. I too smiled at that one.

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    1. Thank you sweetheart โค ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you sweetheart โค ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Oh my god – this is so so beautifully written – I love such imperfectness in your poetry, for it is perfect for me – โค๏ธ

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    1. Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. My absolute pleasure

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  3. Thanks for this wonderful article. One other thing is that the majority of digital cameras come equipped with any zoom lens that enables more or less of the scene being included by way of ‘zooming’ in and out. All these changes in focusing length usually are reflected while in the viewfinder and on substantial display screen at the back of any camera.

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  4. Hello ullu , this is my new blog ๐Ÿ˜‘

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  5. Vijethkannan says:

    Marvellous post๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜

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    1. Thank you โค ๐Ÿ™‚
      It's a pleasure knowing a tamil writer on WP ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Vijethkannan says:

        You too, Wow ๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒทโค๏ธ

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      2. Nandri ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…โค

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      3. Vijethkannan says:

        ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒท๐Ÿ’ฎ

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  6. Chiru says:

    Fabulous description of imperfection in perfection..
    Life is as it is so does are we…

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    1. Thank you so much chiru โค ๐Ÿ™‚

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    Hope you like it .๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. What else one should reply for this comment?

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      2. Thank you very much dear for the appreciation

        Sweetly gently

        Not rudely arrogant type

        My exams in few days
        Give me your blessings

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      3. I behave the way I am.
        Sorry if you felt so rude.
        Btw All the best for your exams.

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      4. Thank you very much beautiful angel meeru ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ‘ป

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    1. Thank you Mathew ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Welcome ๐Ÿ˜

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  8. Muntazir says:

    This is really good. More power to your pen

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚
      Much love from this side

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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