Pond and moon

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Probing for the moon
In an open pond

My face appeared on the stagnant water
A breezy wind made the flowers

from the nearby tree fall down dancing

The rustling leaves fell on the pond
Trembling my reflection on water abruptly
The face on the pond whirled
And the image disappeared twiddling


Choler aroused with anxiety
I stood up to tromp the water

Suddenly a hand clenched my foot
Kissing my toe, his eyes smiled

Time froze 
Drifting flowers stuck in midway

Pulling me closer,
His finger pointed the pond
Our image gleamed under the moon
With his lip on mine
.


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30 Comments Add yours

  1. Fiery says:

    How dreamy and beautifully written xx

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    1. Thank you so much ❤ 🙂

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  2. Bharath Upendra says:

    Too good, ka!

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    1. 😐
      Thanks anna ❤ 😀

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    1. Thank you sweetheart 💙

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  3. What a beautiful rendition Meera …very dreamy like feel… excellent…👌

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    1. Thank you so much Ana ❤
      How are you?
      How's life going dear?

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      1. Great Meets… everything is smooth. Hope you are having good times too.

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      2. Thats great to know ❤ my love
        Im good too but not great.
        trying to be the one.

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      3. Uhmm…looks like you sre climbing up from one of the low point. Dear… you know, if you ever need anything, just ask. Ok va…

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      4. You can understand things even when I don’t say explicitly ❤ Love you for this
        Thank you 🙂
        Yes, struggling to survive in a new city with a new job.
        It's bit difficult for a girl like me to survive in a new place being an introvert.
        Still trying to fit into the box with roommates and colleagues

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      5. Uhmm… completely get your stand. Please take care of yourself and never feel you are alone. Being introvert is not a sin. It simply means you like your space and it takes time for you to adjust to a new place…a new job…new colleagues…new room.
        Sometimes the groan inside the heart of some people are enough to understand what they are going through.
        Take good care of yourself Meera.

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  4. This poem is so skillfully written and crafted that I enjoyed it despite not being able to relate to the theme.

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  5. google says:

    yo its pst very interesting

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  6. Magical – beautiful

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    1. Thank you Shantanu bro 🙂

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  7. Lovely and romantic poem.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  8. Nima Mohan says:

    so beautifully imagined !!! the verses , the picture, the feel… everything !!!! Loved it !!!

    Please visit and follow mine too 🙂

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    1. Thank you ❤ 🙂
      Yeah sure !
      Love and blessings from this side 🙂

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  9. Diego Kaune says:

    Exceptional post however , I was wanting to know if you could write a litte more on this subject? I’d be very grateful if you could elaborate a little bit further. Thank you!

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  10. Chiru says:

    Hey Meera.. Hope you doing good.. Its been long time..
    Wonderful poem by the way.. You imagination level……….

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    1. Hehe, Thank you for your kind words.
      Yes, I am doing good 😀 How are you?

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      1. Chiru says:

        I am doing good Meera.. Ungala than romba naala kaanom..

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