Autumn

The rustling leaves bestowed lulu to the breezy evening..
My hair danced to and fro by heeding to the unuttered stories of zephyr..

Cuckoo..Cuckoo.. she sang concealing inside a bombastic tree..
The deciduous leaves are drifting to unknown places  and new leaves are supplanting them slowly..
The clouds suddenly turned grey and played by hitting against each other..They laughed with a spark of light too !
I was expecting my bus instead a few drops fell on me..
So, I hastened to accompany the cuckoo under the tree..

An astounding rainbow appeared in front of my eyes..


Parked his bike and hied towards me not to get bedewed.
Yes, he is the one..heart whispered.
The pitter -patter sound of rain added rhythm to the old rustling leaves blowing away..
Circumstantially looking into his eyes, the pelt washed away my path and inarticulated me..
Breath-taking eye to eye discourse..
Slowly the rain stopped


and the rainbow faded.
 

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84 Comments Add yours

  1. Sakshi says:

    Beautiful words and beautiful picture

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    1. Thank you sweetheart 🙂

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  2. Nirant Gurav says:

    Dis is just just amazing work mate & pictures are beautiful too

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    1. Thank you so much dear ❤ ❤ 🙂
      Glad you liked it 🙂

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  3. Raj says:

    Slowly the rain stopped … and ?

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  4. Kranti says:

    Amazingly beautiful!!

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    1. Thank you so much sweet heart ❤ 🙂

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      1. Kranti says:

        My pleasure always! 😊❤️

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  5. So Beautiful ,Meera ji❤❤😉

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    1. Thank you so much my dost ❤ 🙂

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  6. Thought for Change says:

    Lovely

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    1. ❤ Thank you Adi .. Lots of love to you 🙂

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    1. Thank you sweet heart ❤ 🙂

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  7. Hey….Meera dear ….you are back and i didn’t knw it. Good words as usual dear …how are you?

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    1. Hey sweetheart ❤ I'm good .. how are you?
      Thank you dear 🙂

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      1. Suoer aa iruken Meera. Exam ellam eppidi pogudhu?

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      2. Sema sema ❤ 🙂 Hamm.. pogudhu da.. next 23'am thedhi .. adhuku dhan padichutu iruken 🙂 Ne solu how'z life?

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      3. Nov 23rd aa ..adutha exam? Yen ivalavu gap? Ennaku ennada appdiye jammu nu poyittirukku. .

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      4. haha sema sema .. working ? Hamm ama dear .. phase 2 .. so preparing for that 🙂

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      5. So appappo vandhittu poguvinge thane….blog ille…preparation nalla poyittirukka exam ukku?

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    1. Thank you dear ❤ 🙂

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      1. rue202 says:

        You’re welcome!

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  8. Ravisingh says:

    Splendid! Brilliant picture!
    Thank you,Meera!

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    1. Pleasure is mine Sir 🙂

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  9. Heartfelt words there…good one there Meera.

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  10. ~H@rdip~ says:

    Lovely creation 👌❤️

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    1. Thank you Hardip ❤ 🙂

      Like

  11. Chiru says:

    Amazing pics and amazing write up Meera.

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      1. Chiru says:

        Keep writing such posts.. glad that u r addressing as nanba.. Ipolam pasangale inda word use panardhu ila..

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      2. Hehe Umm.. Nalla healthy ana nanbargal kedaikradhay kashtam airuchu ipolam.. so never miss good ones ❤ 🙂
        Thank you for such motivating words chiru 🙂

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      3. Chiru says:

        Ama romba kastam ipolam.. mitcham irukra nala friends ah maintain panradhu naladhu.
        happy blogging meera.

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  12. Chiru says:

    Menawhile I have nominated you for the Sunshine blogger award. Do visit https://inspirechange27.wordpress.com/2018/10/28/2nd-sunshine-blogger-award/

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    1. Thank you so much dear 🙂

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      1. Chiru says:

        Your blog deserves it..

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    1. Thank you so much dear ❤ 🙂

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    1. Thank you dost ❤ 🙂

      Like

  13. robertcday says:

    Your prose is as purple as the day is long, but who could fail to be charmed by your optimistic themes and enthusiasm. 🙂
    Kindness – Robert.

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    1. That’s so kind of you .. Your words really mean a lot to me .. Thank you so much 🙂
      Love and blessings 🙂

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  14. Alien Poet says:

    Arumayana pathivu..ithuve Tamilil irunthiruthaal nalla irukum…the feelings will be more beautiful if u express the same in tamil words…nice pic too my friend Meera..nalla name kooda

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    1. Aaathi en peru 😂😂
      Thank you so much Mr.Alien .. Hmm amanga .. thaai mozhi enaikumay manasa thodum .. ezhudha muyarchi panren 🙂
      Nandri Nanba ❤ 🙂

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      1. Alien Poet says:

        naanum eluthanum//after reading ur poem..i want to write a tamil one..after long time. i have few tamil poems in my blog..mudinja padinga..madurai tamila?

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      2. Ilanga .. Yeah kandipa ezhudhunga .. 🙂 so many good hearts to cheer you up ❤ 🙂
        And sure .. kandipa pakren 🙂

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      3. Alien Poet says:

        Arumai arumai.. tamilnu naan guess pannathu right thaan… 🙂 appo kongu tamila thaan irukonum

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  15. I surpassed autumn reading your blog. It is enchanting to read this morning. Thank you for the bliss 😊

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words Vishnu 😊
      Love and blessings 💙🎊

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  16. Sana says:

    This is so beautiful. 🎀

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    1. Thank you sweetheart ❤

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    1. Thank you so much dear 🎁🎈
      Love and blessings 💙🎊

      Like

  17. Jyo says:

    So beautiful words and a FAAAB capture !

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    1. God 😐😐The picture is from Google !!!
      And the poem is from my pen 😊
      Thank you sweetheart ❤

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  18. Wonderful Post. I love how you described the rainbow and then how you met the while hiding from the rain.

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    1. Thank you sweetheart ❤
      Love and blessings 💙🎊 from this side.

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  19. The nature, your words and the rainbow all beautiful

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    1. Thank you so much 😊

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂
      Love and blessings ❤ 🙂

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  20. Most welcome 🎉
    Same to you

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  21. Truly beautiful piece of writing

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you dear 🙂
      Love and blessings ❤ 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  22. Wow! What a beauty to imagine😍

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Thank you sweetheart 🙂

      Like

  23. Soulful and captivating,you the truth, ☮️

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  24. aruna3 says:

    Most lovely.i too like autumn,dear!!

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    1. Hehe Thank you dear 🙂

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      1. aruna3 says:

        🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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  25. You’re an outstanding writer my dear meeru ❤

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    1. Means a lot
      Thank you so much kashu ❤ 🙂

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      1. Most welcome dear ❤

        Check my blogs and give me your valuable feedbacks

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      2. Yeah sure 🙂 My pleasure

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