Mom ..

 

“I wont endure a desultory life like you,

without accomplishing anything in the world”..Squalled gazing at my mom..

 

Eyes positing, that her dreams expired after birthing to an asinine tyke like me…

her gracious grin explicated the unuttered  words..

 

september 9, 2019 _ 2_00 pm _ findlay residence (34)

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41 Comments Add yours

  1. Pure…pure…feeling! Great poem Meera!👍🏻

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    1. Glad that you liked it ! Thank you so much Piyush 🙂

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  2. Kranti says:

    you’ve penned down your feelings very well! Awesome!!

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  3. OneLife says:

    This one is so deep and intense, I don’t even know how many would be able to connect to it. I appreciate the attempt to explore that side of human emotion.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words ☺😊

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  4. ShankySalty says:

    Very deep……my eyes full with tears😥

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    1. 😓😓 I’m sorry 🌷ye lo 🍫 apke liye 😅😅 smile please

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      1. ShankySalty says:

        Heheehe……thank you for this lovely chocolate but Maa/Mom word hai hi aisaa sb ko emotional kr deta hai………you have written very well👍

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      2. ShankySalty says:

        Hehehe……thank you for this lovely chocolate…….but ye Maa/Mom word hai hi aisaa sb ko emotional kr deta haii………and you have written very well👍

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  5. Awesome. You write fabulously beautiful

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    1. Thank you so much Shantanu.

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  6. Wonderful piece! “her gracious grin explicated the unuttered words”

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  7. Chiru says:

    So deep and wonderfully penned…!!

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    1. Thank you chiru 🎁🎈

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  8. ~H@rdip~ says:

    It’s touching 👌😊 well penned 👍

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    1. Thank you dostu ji 🙂

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      1. ~H@rdip~ says:

        My pleasure meeraji🤗😊

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  9. Very beautiful post . Just loved it .☺️☺️

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    1. Thank you.. Glad that you liked it sweetie pie 🎁🎈🙌

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      1. Always welcome!!!! Please do read my blog post too !!!!!!! I will be glad if you read it 😊

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      2. Yeah sure! Always my pleasure 😊 for beautiful writings​!

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  10. perfectly penned akka. I admire at your works.

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