Busted Promises ..

 

It’s shuddery to sail,
Should we go for it? she oppugned him dreadly.

It wont be scary when I’m with you, he grinned.

What if I fell into the hands of storm? she freaked out !

“Oh..! baby.. I know swimming..”
he gruntled her.

She sat taciturnly next to him..
Clasping her hand he uttered looking into her eyes..
“Just remember you don’t have to face alone..
You always have me by your side”

The euphonical waves cued the busted promises..

-OS

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Link: https://reddevil21blog.wordpress.com/

Happy day ahead โค ๐Ÿ™‚

37 Comments Add yours

  1. A Man Deep says:

    Amazing piece. The pic is nothing before the lines. โ˜บ๏ธ

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    1. It adds meaning to my pen ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you Aman

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      1. A Man Deep says:

        You’re welcome. โ˜บ๏ธ

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  2. Such a lovely write-up, brought a smile on my face. Its very enriching to read such pieces. Keep writing!

    And by the way, we have nominated you for ‘Sunshine Blogger Award’. Please check it out, here( https://thejetsetgocouple.com/2018/09/22/sunshine-blogger-award/ ) and share your thoughts.
    Happy weekend!!

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    1. Thank you so much dear โค ๐Ÿ™‚
      yup will see ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you for the nomination ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. ~H@rdip~ says:

    Beautifully penned ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜Š love that conversation ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿค—

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    1. Thank you Hardip ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ~H@rdip~ says:

        My pleasure ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. AQUIB says:

    That’s lovely so to read and poignant as well. Kudos and more power to your pen. Best wishes.

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    1. Glad that you liked it ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you AQUIB

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      1. AQUIB says:

        Oh, mention not. Always my pleasure. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you dear

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  5. Loved reading this! Great work

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    1. Thank you Abhishek ! ๐ŸŽ

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      1. You’re welcome, and thanks for that gift!

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      2. Haha .. yeah it is ladened with happiness!

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  6. Chiru says:

    Beautiful pic and awesome writing yar.

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    1. Thank you chiru ๐Ÿ™‚
      If you don’t mind ..may I know where do you belong to ?

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      1. Chiru says:

        I m from Chennai.. Where do you belong.?
        If u don’t mind may I know your name..?

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      2. Haha Im from coimbatore ๐Ÿ™‚ Yeah sure ๐Ÿ™‚
        En peru Meera

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      3. Chiru says:

        Nice to see u in blogging Meera. I thought u r a north Indian..

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      4. Haha North lol no way ๐Ÿ™‚
        That’s sweet knowing you too !

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      5. Chiru says:

        By the way my full name is Chiranjive.. A very few have addressed me by this name though. Only my school teachers did.

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      6. Haha ๐Ÿ˜› Well, Chiru sounds good ๐Ÿ™‚

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      7. Chiru says:

        Hahaha yes and easy to pronounce. Thanks.

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      8. You’re Welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. No ๐Ÿ™‚ your neighbor state Bro โค ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ARUN NEMMARA says:

        Tamil Nadu ? Sister

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      2. Yesh yesh โค ๐Ÿ™‚ It's always a pleasure knowing people who belongs to my surrounding ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. You came strong and straight to the pen and the point,you are the truth with your words, right on! โ˜ฎ๏ธ

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    1. Thank you
      Love and blessings ๐Ÿ’™๐ŸŽŠ

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