Another day without your smile..

Another day without you..!

You actualized me..

kissing your forehead was pleasance 

than fellating your lips..

Your love agnized me..

clasping your mitt was 

revelling than squelching your bosom..

As the years passed by

you flunked to teach me..How to live without you..!

Only a few eternal relationships are meant to be forever ..!



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41 Comments Add yours

  1. Could sense a plethora emotions here – love, pain, agony, appreciation, fulfillment yet emptiness. Nicely written

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    1. Thank you dear ❤ 🙂

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      1. Missed the ‘of’ before, saw it just now. Hope you understood that I meant ” a plethora ‘of’ emotions ” .

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      2. Haha yes .. Not at all a problem 🙂 I got you dear 🙂


  2. OneLife says:

    Warm and scintillating. I feel inspired reading such creative work. Great going 😚.

    Liked by 5 people

  3. rue202 says:

    This is really nice. Like the picture from ‘Up’.

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  4. In his memory I lay thinking of the joyful moments he made come true by the bay.. Beautiful piece!

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    1. Thank you dear 🎁😄

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  5. Venom says:

    I’ll be waiting for my classes, little. 😀

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    1. Hup 😂😂Bhai Bhai 😅😅


    1. Thank you dear 🎁🎈🌷😅😆


  6. Beautiful poem. Nice pic.

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  7. aruna3 says:

    Welcome dear!!on my blog with love.

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      1. aruna3 says:


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  8. aruna3 says:

    Wow.wonderful description of eternal love… means only sacrifice-i think.

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    1. Thank you so much dear 🙂


  10. Maanya says:

    i could feel it😢

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    1. Thank you for stopping by dear 🙂


      1. Maanya says:

        my pleasure.i just love reading

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  11. Alien Poet says:

    are you a literature student? your words are really meant to say something.nice to meet a genius

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    1. No, I’m not 🙂 That’s great knowing an alien too 🙂

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      1. Alien Poet says:

        🙂 haha..really love being an alien to the world..rather a humanoid 😛

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