Another day without your smile..

Another day without you..!

You actualized me..

kissing your forehead was pleasance 

than fellating your lips..

Your love agnized me..

clasping your mitt was 

revelling than squelching your bosom..

As the years passed by

you flunked to teach me..How to live without you..!

Only a few eternal relationships are meant to be forever ..!

 

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49 Comments Add yours

  1. Could sense a plethora emotions here – love, pain, agony, appreciation, fulfillment yet emptiness. Nicely written

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    1. Thank you dear ❤ 🙂

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      1. Missed the ‘of’ before, saw it just now. Hope you understood that I meant ” a plethora ‘of’ emotions ” .

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      2. Haha yes .. Not at all a problem 🙂 I got you dear 🙂

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  2. OneLife says:

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  3. rue202 says:

    This is really nice. Like the picture from ‘Up’.

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  4. In his memory I lay thinking of the joyful moments he made come true by the bay.. Beautiful piece!

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    1. Thank you dear 🎁😄

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  5. Venom says:

    I’ll be waiting for my classes, little. 😀

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    1. Thank you dear 🎁🎈🌷😅😆

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  6. Beautiful poem. Nice pic.

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  8. aruna3 says:

    Wow.wonderful description of eternal love…..love means only sacrifice-i think.

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    i could feel it😢

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      1. Alien Poet says:

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